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sorry for the lack of deviations, im really sick.

I HOPE U LIKE IT!
AND 3 CHEERS FOR MY 50 DEVIATION
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Now now , being all honest here . I wouldn't want to sound rude or anything , but the anatomy is quite off .
To begin , all dogs have a hock and a stifle . The hock should always be lines up , unless in a position which allows it to be not lined up . But here i don't see a hock /or/ a stifle , so that's a big problem . I would suggest Googling it .
Second , the ears should be slightly bent at the tip . And I would suggest not using a black outline to separate the colours . The dog should have a muzzle , and the hair should be a little shorter . I would suggest doing a better colouring job , filling in those white spots . The paws should be more , um , "paw like" , such as they shouldn't be little ovals . And the tail should just be a /little bit/ shorter , not a lot .
Overall this is a really cute picture to be honest , but with a little more anatomy it would be even more cute ^ v ^
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Sorry for the low rating on it but really. I don't give many stars anyone really so yeah.

Do you use guidelines? Pre-question to everything ;)

Okay for starters heads are more than circles, I recommend if you don't know how to draw them to look up references to them or I am always here to help! I might not be the best but I have a basic understanding of the way heads work. My art isn't realistic either so if you're going to try and learn realistic I can try my best but I'm just getting a grasp on them myself.

Next, bodies from my understanding look something like headOoOtail. Blue is a corgi mix so the body would be a tad shorter but the height you have it at is nice. The tail would also be a bit fatter but again, you're just starting out and everyone always has room to improve!

Paws, these are tricky. Trust me I'm still trying to get better at them and I've been drawing them for a loooong time. Paws have a bit more of a round shape to them, if you'd like to look at it I've included a redline of this with some paws off to the side.
[link] Remember, I'm always here to help and be a friend if you'd like! Sorry the lines on mine look crummy by the way my tablet pressure turned off a bit ago.
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MegPaige Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
i think you did a great job, no matter what. :hug:
keep up the good work and keep on posting art!
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:iconjackdavv:
jackdavv Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks!
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:iconmegpaige:
MegPaige Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
no problem
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ShowTimePony12 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
if you don't want rude comments from faggots
draw every second or something
i did that without realizing that untill now 
it worked
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jackdavv Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ahahaha wha? XD
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ShowTimePony12 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i don't know i thought i would give you advice on what to do if you want to draw better so you don't have to memorize steps on how to draw something from a youtube video
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MissingSkeleton Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't get why people are hating on this?? Also a comment about animals never smiling, yes they do. I've seen various animals smile, and this also was not meant to be realistic of there would be fur patterning on it.

Anywho, I like it it's adorable
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jackdavv Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks for understanding
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BullenTheBullen2 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013   Traditional Artist
hihihi, this is so cute! ^^
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arashi--cat Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013
im almost dead
call me an amberlamps
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jackdavv Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
?
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arashi--cat Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013
it kills me the pic
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jackdavv Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
good way...?
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arashi--cat Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013
n
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Sundira Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:/ Seriously just don't reply to orange, and you'll probably reply attempting to troll like most people do. I'm not trying to be the good guy but she didn't do anything wrong and the possibility of you basically smacking her with "you're bad at art. you shouldn't make it anymore." and uninspiring her to do her best, is too damn high. Other than that, i'm 100% positive you started off extremely bad at art, as did I. Hers is actually way better than my art was.
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Sundira Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, Dont be rude come on now. I see too much of this, You got bashing to do? Do it in your mind.
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Miiroku Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
D'awww, thank you so much. :D
:hug: She's really cute!
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jackdavv Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
if you wanna see the making of it then its here------> [link]
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jackdavv Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you! :D Im so happy you like it
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XxLokowolfxX Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow this is one of your best picures!
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jackdavv Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
really? thanks! I myself don't really like it :|
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Carniv0red Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Cuuute x3
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jackdavv Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you!
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